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July 28
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Madefire Motion Book Tool
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"Nobody should be alone in a cold night like this"--Who is this woman who approaches unfortunate souls in the streets? A tale from the horror collection "Bleeding Hearts".
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LiamSharp Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Professional Artist
This… is just wonderful. 
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Derveniotis Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Professional Artist
 Oh, you know... a light reading for summertime...
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LiamSharp Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Professional Artist
Ha ha!
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Derveniotis Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Professional Artist
Oh, and: check message!
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Kqbuckley Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Wow, very cool artwork, Spiros! You really pull off a great noir vibe!  Awesome experimentation with the tool, too. 
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Derveniotis Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Professional Artist
 Tried to keep it simple, as the instinct is always there to put all the bells and whistles one can possibly come up with. This is the basic "enhanced printed page", but still an enhanced printed page. Won't rest until I find a way to abolish all the print devices: panels, gutters, balloons, the whole lot!
 Thanks for the kind words
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BJ-Vynz Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Student General Artist
Man, I really loved this work! 
The story and art equally intriguing.


I really love the composition and layout, the way the negative space blends right into the images is just so well done and as entire pages they are just so beautiful to look at.

Really enjoyed this
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Derveniotis Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Professional Artist
So glad you enjoyed it!
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krukof2 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Professional
Superbe :wow: :clap: Wonderful :#1:

Story and art are great  .
The motion is very good.

:star: :sherlock::blahblah::pc::work:
& now the minute of technical talking  :)
if you are OK with that .

The only thing , and I m not sure about what I will say , is the speed of the text ....
the text appears bloc by bloc , or baloon after baloons , very speed .
We have not the time to read than another  part  of text appears .... may be it's too speedy .

and in a similar way , maybe the timing between the differnt panels is too short/speedy to fit exactly with the atmosphere.

anyway your work is very good, and it's also a global  thinking about  the speed with the MotionBookTool.
What do you think about it?
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Derveniotis Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Professional Artist
Man, I love talking about the technicals of MB, especially with someone who has experence in it!

 The speed: Τhat's what tap points are for. I have put one on every panel, (roughly one every two baloons) and no text disappears unless you tap the red arrow to proceed. So it's up to the reader to impose the speed, rougly like what he would do in print, but with the annoying feeling you get on live streaming when internet speed is slow. NOt perfect, but still  a fairer deal than tv/movies and subtitles.
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